tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-698161824612872585.post3512347065837059286..comments2023-10-06T18:05:13.533-07:00Comments on A Day Into the Writer : Change ... Natalie Deckerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09420337655010987555noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-698161824612872585.post-60151119370368257422013-07-17T08:46:58.950-07:002013-07-17T08:46:58.950-07:00This is a good scene, Roza. We have a sense of pl...This is a good scene, Roza. We have a sense of place, vivid and real. We see what the protagonist is feeling and thinking. We know what she wants and what she gets. Bravo. Yes, my writing has indeed changed through the years. The last story I sold to Cricket Magazine started as a funny story about a teen and some youths having an adventure in a cave and changed into a scary struggle for the protagonist and her brother. The story’s in the October 2012 issue of Cricket.<br />Thanks for following my Adventures in Writing blog, Roza. http://victoriamarielees.blogspot.com <br />Victoria Marie Leeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05294868315757138169noreply@blogger.com